Category | Exceeds Expectations 4 | Meets Expectations 3 | Needs Improvement 2 | Does not meet expectations 1 |
Pre-write, Draft, Revise, Edit | I completed all pre-writing exercises by myself and developed a good plan for my story. I created several drafts and effectively used the feedback I received. | I completed most of the pre-writing exercises without much help. I developed a plan for my story and completed at least two draft, using some of feedback I received. | I completed one of the pre-writing exercises with a lot of help. My story plan was incomplete or not very well organized. I completed one draft but my revision did not use much of the feedback I received. | I did not complete any of the pre-writing exercises and could not work without help. I did not create a final plan for my story. I did not revise the rough draft or use any of the I feedback received. |
Focus | I have a strong focus or theme that shows understanding of the prompt. My focus is strong throughout the entire narrative. | I have a clear focus that shows my understanding of the prompt. My focus is strong for most of your narrative. | I had some focus that showed I understood most of the prompt. I did not follow this focus in my story which made it hard to tell if I really understood it. | I have little or no focus or theme, which makes it seem like I didn’t understand the prompt. |
Content | My storyline includes details, conflict, resolution, and other story elements. My story is written in a correct order of events. | My storyline includes some details and other narrative story elements and is written in a correct order of events. | My storyline has some details, but does not follow the rules of writing a story. The events of my story are not always in order. | My storyline is missing some important details, and is not written in a story form. My events are not always in order. |
Organization | My story has a clear beginning, middle, and end. I use transition words and have both a complete introductory paragraph and a complete conclusion. | My story has a clear beginning, middle, and end. I use transition words. I have an introductory paragraph and a conclusion, but possibly not be complete. | My main events are in order but I do not have a complete introductory paragraph or a complete conclusion. | My main events may not be in order, which makes my story hard to understand. My introductory paragraph and conclusion are incomplete or missing. |
Style | I use language well. My sentences are clear and give the reader clear images. | I show a good use of language. My sentences are clear and sometimes provide the reader with good images. | I made some mistakes in language, which make it hard to understand some points. I did not give my reader many clear pictures. | I have very little control of my language and sentences. I do not give my readers any clear pictures. |
Conventions | I use a variety of sentence structures with very few errors in grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation. The errors that are there do not make writing unclear. | I use a variety of sentence structures with some errors in grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation. A few of these errors may make parts of the writing unclear. | I did not use a lot of different sentence structures. Some of my sentences were fragments and there are many errors in grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation. | Many sentences are awkward or are fragments. There are many grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation errors. These errors make the story very difficult to read. |